Hi, again! As i mentioned in the description for Part 1 (https://soundgasm.net/u/make_me_a_good_girl/The-Rainstorm-Part-1), I wrote this last summer for my dirty pen pal while i was horny and alone during a massive summer rainstorm. We had another big storm tonight, so I dug up the story and recorded the two parts. I would love some feedback on the script (my own), on my reading (too fast? too monotonous?), on the very few moans and whimpers (should there be more?) ans anything else you feel like telling me. I'm not new to writing dirty smut for people, but I am new to recording it, and to sending it to an audience larger than 1. I'd love to hear about anything you think could be improved. :) Talk soon.